An ostracon

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…..

thousand pieces on the floor

glare in flare of crystal chandelier

colours shed from green to blue

so many different shapes and sizes

some are rough and some are smooth

most are sharp but you can find blunt too

try to pick them up all together

they will cut your hands

and you’ll bleed as never

next time be more careful

because only a fool

gives you second chance to drop a jewel

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~ od damls na maj 3, 2012.

10 komentarjev to “An ostracon”

  1. Oh my. Such an ominous ending. Wow

  2. glare in flare of crystal chandelier – beautiful visual line.
    Love the ending!
    🙂

  3. life can be so like this,don’t we all wish it could be all smooth.

  4. this is fabulous!

  5. Brings tears to my eyes, it’s so touching, and also, the message is so powerful.
    ” only a fool gives you second chance to drop a jewel”
    Profound.

    • I am so glad you like it and that you were touched by it, its pretty painful poem, at least for my soul. Thank you so much for stopping by. 🙂

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